Before – some gray wash added in the lower area
After – more gray wash and the big gutsy move, copyright 2014
My relationship with the Year Long Canvas (YLC) continues, and she has a mind of her own…so when she speaks to me I listen.
Monday’s class was rather different and fascinating for me. At the suggestion of my instructor, Homare Ikeda, I reluctantly covered a large portion of the lower portion of the painting with a gray wash. He loves gray washes – he uses them a lot in his own work. In the hallway outside our classroom is hanging about a 4ft x 4 ft Ikeda painting, and there is a large gray square area in the middle of the painting that dominates – obviously at some point he thought the painting would look better and work better and be more balanced if he grayed-out this portion of the composition. I cannot show you a picture of it because I would be violating his copyright, but the remainder of the painting is busy – complicated and playful – with zigzags, polka dots, squiggles and other childlike gestures done in various colors of paint. The gray area is not the focal point – it throws the emphasis to all the outside areas of the painting which are the focal point. Very unorthodox, to do that – but that is typical Homare Ikeda. That is precisely why he is who he is. See his paintings at http://www.homareikeda.com
So, we agreed it was time to simplify, and what has become the focal point and/or the STRENGTH of the painting (the multi-colored busy-ness in the middle area of the right side of the painting) is NOT the place to do that, so it seemed logical to use the wash right where I used it. Painting is often a series of additions and subtractions – you try something on the canvas and either it enhances the painting or it does not. And it might enhance the painting during many hours of work sessions and then suddenly when you do some specific thing to the other parts of the painting, everything changes and the area you enhanced no longer enhances. After cautiously spreading the gray wash over the bottom, I liked it – it made everything else stand out by comparison and it concentrated all the action more effectively on the focal point. So I continued the gray wash farther up the left area of the canvas, covering up even a larger percentage of the canvas with it. The purplish-blue in the upper left was grayed as well. Then I decided I liked the path of stark white so I whitened it up even more – taking it more prominently from lower left across and over toward the mid-right, which gave the focal area more punch, because the white contrasted so nicely with all the bright colors there.
I was surprising myself – I was going forward with something I thought I would not really like and finding out it made everything better. Gray is not a fav color of mine, but it did what it was supposed to do because it is so neutral. The advantage of gray is that it does not conflict with much. It is merely gray.
So while I was on a roll I decided to create a sort of something-or-other to look THROUGH, right on top and over the surface of the focal point, as if you are seeing all that focal point action behind it – and instead of doing an obvious window with a square-ish frame I decided to do a series of slanted parallel lines almost suggestive of venetian blinds, right over the top of the focal point – the reason being to give it more importance! Anyone viewing the painting would feel that they were seeing through the lines to a special scene or image – and since it already had a round sort of blurred fried egg shape like a sun, perhaps I was suggesting that the view was of a landscape with a colorful hillside village underneath the sun, seen from behind open venetian shades. I thought it might give the painting a quirky twist – a mysterious turn of events.
Well it seemed a risk worth talking, so I used turquoise lines in a non-square-ish, somewhat distorted way, and I drew them right on top of my focal point. YIKES YIKES YIKES I kept thinking as I did it – this is either going to be great or it is soooo not going to be great.
When I showed it to Homare he was very, very pleased – big smile. And my work for the day was done.
I would so love to leave the YLC this way and call her done….I would title her “Seeing Puerto Vallarta” …… but that is not the challenge, is it?
I just love how the art is morphing.
Thanks MB – so do I but it is going to be hard to cover any of this up now – I am happy with the way it is!!
IMHO–stick a fork in it now and quit the class. It’s perfect.
HA I agree with you – don’t know if I can stick with this. There are no Monday classes for the summer, so it might stay just where it is for a while….
Thanks for your comment!
So start a new one to complete the classes after the summer break! (He was right about the greys BTW — gave me something to consider too.)
Yes the gray was a definite awakening for me.
Since he gave me the challenge of the YLC I hate to be a quitter, and I hate to let him down….I am so conflicted. The painting is on my list of all time favorites….but he has said before that the strength you must develop is the strength to let it go with the confidence that you can do something even better over the top of it. It is trusting yourself, he says.
What do you think about that?
Ouch. Tricky. He’s right, philosophically. But your own heart is what you must trust. There may be other ways to develop. In fact there will be. So luckily you have some time to ponder who to listen to.
I clicked on the updated canvas and WOW! Glorious!! I agree with Jann, but I know you gotta keep going on this. What a conundrum.
clicked on it to enlarge it (and thanks for fixing it so it can be enlarged).
Read the newest comments from Jann and my reply and let me know what you think.
This is so hard. My first instinct is to tell you to go with your gut. You are such a talented artist who has painted for many years. The instructor’s thoughts about letting go and doing something better over it might be better directed to someone not so
accomplished as yourself. If you love this as is then stick with it. As Jann says, you can start another canvas.